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The drawings weren't the best in the world but they were good-- the main problems with them that I saw was that you overused gradients, didn't use a style that looked good and didn't match up with itself (for example, the outlines of the characters and backgrounds [for the most part] were smooth and done with lines, then you used an unsmoothed paintbrush tool with a color too dark in contrast to the previous color for the shading, making the style look sort of noobish if i say so myself). The animation was good, more movement could have made the flash a whole lot better but it was good enough. When you make another movie, also, try to make the violence seem more realistic. the guy wouldn't just sit there and take the punch, he would at least flinch or react or bleed or something. Also, something that could've raised my score for sound up by ALOT was that you could have compressed the sound differently. It's good that you at least streamed it, though. Another more unusual problem that i noticed with this is that occasionally some symbol used in the movie would be on a higher layer than the quality menu... before you submit another movie to newgrounds, make sure to spend more time screening it for simple errors like this. that didn't lower the score any though, but having a less glitchy movie makes you seem more proffessional.

You chose a good place to end the movie and it was actually a decent music video though-- you'll get alot better, just keep making flash and take constructive critisism like this review into mind. I'm really not trying to be offensive by saying any of this, so don't get mad.

Overall score: 7/10

Good, but not great.

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Score: 10

"I love you."

submission: The Greatest Attempt

date: March 7, 2006

almost as much as i love this movie.

Good job sir.

oh, and just to make it so this isnt abusive in any way shape or form:

the original N wasnt italicised. there. now noobs wont say im just blindly sucking up to you in the form of a review (:P)

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Score: 6

"A very.. controversial movie, at least in my view."

submission: YAAFM 9: Michael Moore

date: April 8, 2005

I`ll be honest. I`m a democrat. I`m what i consider to be a 'die hard' democrat; one who is very serious about his own views. I beileve, personally, that America would be run better under a socialist system.
But enough of an introduction. i only wanted to say clearly that I am biased, but I am going to try my best to view this with an open mind:

First off, this movie raises a question in my mind-
Where did you find these quotes? I beileve they may very well be real and all, but my beleif of their authenticity would dramatically increase if you, or a reviewer replying to this, supplied me with a URL to them.

Also, you described that micheal moore beleives in a socialist system, and so you said this eliminates small business, violence, and in turn freedom. Apparently, you are mixing up socialism with communism. Socialism, to my knowledge, does not eliminate small business or violence. it, again only to my knowledge, requires the rich to pay more taxes and the poor to pay less. it also has a different health care system than the one currently used in the united states, and gives the government a bit more power. This does not eliminate violence, freedom, or small business in any way.

Now that the political stuff is out of the way, i`ll review it as I would hope to with any other flash movie on this site-
There was a bit of a problem with lip sync, at least on my computer. I didn`t really find this one too funny to be honest.. but the beggining where you showcased those who E-mailed you pictures of themselves was kind of funny, and it was highly original.

OVERALL: 3/5- I didn`t like it too much to be honest, but I see the obvious amount of effort in research and in flash that went into this movie, so i`m not going to give it a 2 or 1.

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Score: 8

"make it longer and it should get front page."

submission: Xom-Li: The mansion

date: April 7, 2005

This deserves a better score. the animation was ok, and like the last reviewer pointed out you should work on grammar a bit. However, this game had a very original plotline and character, and it had good first person shooter gameplay.

Something you should work on when you make it longer is to have it not be so repetitive, have the main character go somewhere other than the woods after he kills the boss wolf.

good luck on making the full version.